Literary Analysis: "The Man Who Was Almost a Man" by Richard Wright
Jared Korotney
November 30, 2015
A lot of people can make good arguments as to which theme best
suits the story, such as "quit while you're ahead" or "think
before you act". While these themes do fit in with the story, I feel that
the best theme to have the biggest impact on the story is "maturity is
determined by your actions". I feel that this perfectly describes the
story because it is an accurate description for the main character, Dave
Sanders. He truly believes that he is mature enough to handle a gun, but his
killing the mule shows otherwise, and to add insult to injury, he decides to
run away from his problems, showing that he is not mature enough to handle his
situation.
Moving on to the setting. The short story stars, as
I mentioned earlier, Dave Sanders, a 17-year-old African-American farm worker
who tries to prove to his parents, boss, and his community that he is old and
knowledgeable enough to buy and utilize a gun in order to orient himself into
the Southern adult society that he is about to enter, age-wise. The plot starts
out with Dave begging for hos parents to lend him two dollars in order to pay
for the gun. Although they are very hesitant at first. they decide to let him
buy the gun on one condition: it should belong to Dave's father. After he
successfully buys the gun, he hides it from his parents and brings it to work
with him the next day where his boss, Mr. Hawkins, tells him to go out into the
field and bring the farm mule with him to plow the fields. While in the fields,
he tries to shoot the gun, which he does, only to realize that he accidentally
shot the mule and killed it. When he is coerced into confessing the shooting to
his parents, boss, and community, Mr. Hawkins forgives him, but orders that
Dave pay him two dollars a month in order to buy another mule. That night, he
becomes irritated with the fact that he is now viewed as more of a child that
he was before, as well as having to pay Mr. Hawkins for more than two years. He
then runs away and jumps on a train in order to prove that he is a true man.
The story is told in limited third-person
point-of-view, which the outsider telling the story in Dave's perspective. The
characterization of the story mainly applies to Dave, as his character is more
developed to show that his view on what he wants to be seen as overshadows his
realistic personality: an inexperienced, immature teenager who requires more
knowledge about the real world in order that he can be accepted into the adult
civilization in the South. There are also a few key points in the story in
which irony is made prevalent. For example, situational irony occurs when at
the very end of the story, Dave decides that in order for himself to be viewed
as more mature and manly, he must run away from his responsibilities.
The biggest symbol in the story that can tie back
to the theme of "experience versus inexperience" is the gun. The gun
is a huge symbol for maturity, because only the strong-willed can accept full
responsibility for using a loaded rifle. Dave is not mentally capable enough to
handle the maturity that this gun brings, and it showed when he fired only one
bullet and it hit the mule and killed it. Dave needed to be mature enough to
also listen to his parents when they said that he must give the gun right to
his father, a man who truly understands how dangerous handling a gun can be.
So now, it's time for an overall analysis of the
short story. Richard Wright did an outstanding job detailing a story of
experience and maturity that many people could relate to to this day. If you
ask me, the best group of people who should be reading this story are
high-schoolers, because they are on that transitional path to adulthood, and
many of them still lack the experience to understand the adult-oriented
society. In fact, knowledgeable teachers and parents/guardians should also be
involved in this story as they will have their own experiences related to this
story that teenagers will need to know if they want to be ready for manhood. In
terms of who would like this story, I would have to say an adult that lives in
the South, because the story's location and plot can be very relatable to these
adults, which is also beneficial in the sense that if these adults have kids,
they can educate them in a "the boy who cried wolf" manner that
relates to the story.